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Don't talk to me. Just leave me alone.
I was doing fine all on my own.
You ask me all about my day,
But I don't know what I'm to say.
I try turning my body around.
I face my head towards the ground,
But the conversation goes on still.
I wonder if I can fake being ill.
And as I knew all along,
My words start to come out wrong.
I feel my mind begin to trip,
And out my lips the words slip.
I wonder if my face is sinking.
I wish I knew what you were thinking.
I replay the scene over in my head.
All day I hear what I have said.
Why couldn't you just let me be?
I told you not to talk to me.
This isn't about anyone specific, just everyone.
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FanaticalPublishing Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
Lovely work, thank you for publishing it with me.
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JE-S2 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wanting to comment but not sure what to say that hasn't already been said s: 
hm well it's all true and I really like that you did this! 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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SkeletonsBasements Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Um..may you please write another poem about this, saying why you wouldn't want to talk?
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aquajojo02 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing poem, and nicely structured, now I am learning about the structure of poems, ballards, and many more!
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LadyOfSilver Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your beautiful work has been featured here: [link]
I hope you don’t mind!
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh no, thank you!
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epicawesomeness777 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Okay so now I can't even count all of the fragging awesome poems you've made. I'm pretty dang sure that you have mad skill. Keep doing awesomely awesome with your writing! :excited:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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WhatsThatAgain Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well written!
I can relate to that. Cheer up, it'll get better over time :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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ShadowRose013 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love your writing, I can feel a connection to it. It flows very nicely.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013   Writer
:hug:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013
We all want to be aolone sometimes.
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Unabiding Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I hate when I feel like this. Excellent description.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Unabiding Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome :)
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annikath Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so perfectly accurate~
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. It's always good to know that there's someone else like you.
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annikath Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome :meow: I sincerely hope it'll get easier for you w
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I hope it gets easier for you as well.
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Rakshiel-MoGaidren Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know them feels kid
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