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You're right on the edge,
But you don't want to fall.
You're grasping in the air,
For anything at all.
Finally you find,
A place in my hand.
I begin to pull,
Bring you onto land.
Don't you worry.
You're safe here.
You'll be okay.
There's nothing to fear.
I see you crying.
You think of the end.
You feel so alone,
But I will be your friend.
Just talk with me.
You can even cry.
Just tell me everything.
Please don't be shy.
I just want you to smile.
I know it's tough to do.
Please just remember,
That I am here with you.
I suppose this is a lot like "I Love You", but it's directed at a friend of mine.
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BlackRavenKuria Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this poem is so sweet and kind. I love it. And I really think your friend will appreciate it too if you ever show them it. It really does show that you care and wish to help the, to a better time. There is a lot of heart into this one, you can really see it. And I love it.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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BlackRavenKuria Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome
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SamLeDerpMuffin Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really amazing! Thank you for sharing. 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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SamLeDerpMuffin Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome Heart 
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aww! this is beautiful :') 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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CelestialMemories Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is very sweet. :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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