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You're right on the edge,
But you don't want to fall.
You're grasping in the air,
For anything at all.
Finally you find,
A place in my hand.
I begin to pull,
Bring you onto land.
Don't you worry.
You're safe here.
You'll be okay.
There's nothing to fear.
I see you crying.
You think of the end.
You feel so alone,
But I will be your friend.
Just talk with me.
You can even cry.
Just tell me everything.
Please don't be shy.
I just want you to smile.
I know it's tough to do.
Please just remember,
That I am here with you.
I suppose this is a lot like "I Love You", but it's directed at a friend of mine.
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BlackRavenKuria Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think this poem is so sweet and kind. I love it. And I really think your friend will appreciate it too if you ever show them it. It really does show that you care and wish to help the, to a better time. There is a lot of heart into this one, you can really see it. And I love it.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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BlackRavenKuria Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome
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SamLeDerpMuffin Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really amazing! Thank you for sharing. 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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SamLeDerpMuffin Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome Heart 
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Kairi108 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
aww! this is beautiful :') 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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CelestialMemories Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is very sweet. :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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vaporsheart Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Most precious words i have heard in a while QwQ
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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vaporsheart Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome ^^
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ConstantMirror Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
That's absolutely wonderful.  I'm considering writing it down and bringing it to my friend I'm visiting in the hospital later.  Would that be ok?
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, sure.  Thank you for asking.  I'm really glad you like it so much!  And I hope your friend gets well soon.
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ConstantMirror Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
I wrote it down and gave it to her.  She loved it. :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad I could help! :D
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SculptorOfDreams Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Writer
This poem is wonderful! :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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FaxNiggyFan1134 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is one of the poems I love most: a poem to help another person. And (sometimes) other people you may not know yourself.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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FaxNiggyFan1134 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome chica =D
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WarHexpod Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's like a sequel kind of C: I love this one too :D
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!  :D
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WarHexpod Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome ;P
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