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How can I breathe life
When I have no life in me?
I'm starring in your eyes,
But I don't know what you see.
I'm broken and worn.
I'm unbalanced and used.
I've been on the ledge,
Holding my heart abused.
You say you've been there
And that I saved you.
That doesn't sound right,
Because you saved me too.
I wish that I could hold you
Tight in my arms.
I hear the pain you're in;
Caught in your past's harm.
Alone I hurt too.
Depression's taking it's toll.
I know you feel it too;
That aching in your soul.
Soon you'll return,
And though I don't understand,
You'll only think of me,
Doing whatever you can.
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JustForAge Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
this really hit home.. this is very well written.. you can really feel the emotion in it.. v.v good job
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Winter-Fallspring Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
omg i relate to this so much :)

sometimes two broken people make the strongest bond <3
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful:rose:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome:rose:
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kmills95 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful. :hug: i agree with ~killerlord123 ... i think you saved each other. 
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
Thanks :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :hug:
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
I think you saved each other, in a way.
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dragondave10 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing. Dark, but overall awesome. You did great with this.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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dragondave10 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome.
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