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I sit here and think of you.
Sometimes it seems that's all I do.
Loneliness is all that I feel.
It almost seems like you're not real.
To hold you close would be bliss.
To feel your warmth, your touch, your kiss.
It drives me crazy that you're not here,
And won't be for a whole year.
Being with you is all that I see,
But until then, loneliness will engulf me.
Long distance relationships suck
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squirrel9999 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate.
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FeminineTearsOfPain Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Professional Writer
Wow, I mean, just.... Wow. Reading this was quite an experience for me. I am in a similar position, but a distance that is different, not physical. Thank you for writing and posting this. It's a truly great piece of poetry :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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FeminineTearsOfPain Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Professional Writer
You are quite Welcome :)
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Unfuck-the-World Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Writer
Simple, to the point and powerful. Perfect representation of how much it sucks to listen to your heart sometimes.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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LonerArts Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Student Writer
yes long distance truly does suck but the heart choose wht it wants we cant stop it. just try to ease the pain.
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nasstaran Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh ... beautifull ...
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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arad2509 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Great.
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