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June 19, 2013
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I put on a mask to hide my face.
I make sure that it leaves no trace.
I want to open up myself and share,
But if I do will you still be there?
My thoughts are more twisted than you know.
My self-esteem's extremely low.
Sometimes I have so much fear.
It's so tough to keep my head clear.
I want to kill myself all the time,
But I just tell you that I'm fine.
Sometimes I want to kill others.
That's something you can never discover.
And so I keep it hidden inside.
I don't know if it's fear or pride.
This will change your image of me.
You'll run away from what you see.
You'll never look at me the same.
I don't want to play this game.
So I'll keep myself locked away.
It doesn't matter what I want to say.
Keeping up my high wall,
Is the closest to not being this at all.
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FanaticalPublishing Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014

Lovely work, thank you for submitting it to the Weekly Review; I'm publishing it in today's issue.

NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is phenomenal!:clap:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are so very welcome:aww:
The-Grey-Panther Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so relatable.
One of my greatest wishes is to go all out, and hold nothing back. To act on my more primal instincts, and wreak hell. :evillaugh:
...But I know that if I did do that, I would be labeled a "threat to society" and then probably get locked up somewhere. :(
Oh well. I can always dream, right? ^_^;;
stormygirl335 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013   Writer
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
Plasticwalrus93 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
This reminds me of this song called hungry for a holiday and it talks about hiding yourself everyday. Conor closes it out when he sings "Well if the costume fits keep wearing it, but no Halloween could quite account for this, I guess your getting into character, or just be yourself if that would help, or sink completely into someone else, you dreamt of mountains but sometimes a hole is more comfortable"
Miry123 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student Writer
idk but this remind me of MadCry AND I LOVE THIS~!
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