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Trapped here inside a cage.
Mind filled with so much rage.
Trying everything to break free.
You're just pretending to be me.
I was here all along.
You're the one that is wrong.
I'm not what you want me to be,
So you drive me to this insanity.
I savor every freedom I get.
More will come just yet.
You know I'm not one to control.
Holding me back has taken a toll.
You're afraid of what I'll do,
But the real monster here is you.
This was another side of me writing to me.
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FanaticalPublishing Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014

Lovely work, thank you for submitting it to the Weekly Review; I'll be publishing this in the today's issue.

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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful work!:blackrose::rose:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome:frail:
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dorroaker Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
you speak the true
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BlueDiamondSnow Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is amazing. You are capturing all of this pain and making it into art. Like this poem!Heart 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!  I'm really glad you like it.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013   Writer
:hug:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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epicawesomeness777 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
Dude this is fragging epic!
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