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The answer's no. I don't want you.
It doesn't matter what you do.
You can plead and you can beg,
Drop down and grab my leg.
See, we don't connect at all.
Feel like I'm talking to a wall.
This doesn't have to be the end.
I would love to make a friend.
You acted like that was fine.
But you just had to be mine.
Now you hurl your insult.
Act like this is my fault.
What's so bad with this fate?
We only went on a single date.
Why can't you just see,
You will never be with me.
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vaporsheart Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this poem! The directness and the rhythm is wonderful! :D
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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vaporsheart Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconnpplz: It was my pleasure! ^o^
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LonerArts Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student Writer
it is true. the one who hurts  is all mean to one they hurt. they dont stand up and take the blame. 

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