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I've been given a new view.
I've seen how others see you.
Talking to your best friends.
Relationships meet their ends.
Selfish is what they all say.
Everything has to be your way.
Responsibilities you shirk.
Upset when you have to work.
You consider everyone less.
Think that you know the best.
Want whatever's new and shiny.
At one time that was me.
After time you start to bore.
We just can't give you more.
Something different happened here.
My brokenness you seem to fear.
I used you as my crutch,
But my problems were too much.
All along you had known.
Your intentions weren't shown.
At first you seem like fun,
But you're disliked by everyone.
You have some kind of spell.
They come as you ring the bell.
There's one thing I can say.
I am finally breaking away.
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BlackRavenKuria Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well written. There is a lot of meaning in those words and a strong message. Too many times have people used or have been used by others. Sometimes it's hard to know when enough is enough. Great job, well done.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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BlackRavenKuria Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome
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Spellpunk Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
may I ask how do yousubmit literature    I've been wanting to but I don't know how.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When you're on the submit page, click on Enter text and type it in there.
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Spellpunk Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. oh and its aperently your bitrhday. haha happy birthday ^ ^
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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UndiscoveredMuse Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Writer
wow. tht was good. i like how you summed it all up without needing a lot of detail or imagery. i guess its jst easy to relate to. well done
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Interesting :)
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