You are my obsession.
Source of my depression.
One that I crave.
Love that is depraved.
I still hold on to.
I would die for you.
Even if you're not here.
My mind just won't clear.
Only one I want.
Mentally I attack.
I'd still take you back.
Glad you disappeared.
Return I feared.
Walk through my door.
Want you even more.
Wonder if I'll heal.
Was this even real?
Your poems are amazing
It helps to see we aren't suffering alone
Wow, this absolutely amazing. I can relate 100%.
Thank you for writing this, it really helped clear my mind. ^^
Though it's about depression, it's full of speed.
VERY well written!
I love the flow of this, makes me want to re read it.
I like the rythm and separation of the verses, but I think the punctuation kind of stops the flow. You might want to use commas in some places.
Obsession is a dangerous thing, you know. You can waste years of your life being so obsessed about something, you forget to live your life.
Yeah. I know it's not healthy, but that doesn't change how I feel.
This can mean anything!!!!! I won't say what this reminded me of--in the fear that thousands of those people come up to tarnish your work with crazy, illogical comments not related to this. I like this, because that's what I'm feeling at the moment!
Very strong emotion! I know this feeling
This is so great! Very strong emotions surging off of these words.
I know this feeling.
Hmm.. almost like you read my mind.. *blink*
I love it