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You are my obsession.
Source of my depression.
One that I crave.
Love that is depraved.
I still hold on to.
I would die for you.
Even if you're not here.
My mind just won't clear.
Only one I want.
Continually haunt.
Mentally I attack.
I'd still take you back.
Glad you disappeared.
Return I feared.
Walk through my door.
Want you even more.
Wonder if I'll heal.
Was this even real?
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:iconrainfleuris:
Rainfleuris Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your poems are amazing :aww:
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconrainfleuris:
Rainfleuris Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
No, thank YOU for sharing it with us :) :glomp:
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JoyfullDarkness Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It helps to see we aren't suffering alone
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iHoNk Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this absolutely amazing. I can relate 100%.
Thank you for writing this, it really helped clear my mind. ^^
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Though it's about depression, it's full of speed.
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:iconeiracandles:
EiraCandles Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
beautiful
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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NeverGivingUp0 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
VERY well written!
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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zodiac699 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
I love the flow of this, makes me want to re read it.
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Hanachi-Shitsukki Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like the rythm and separation of the verses, but I think the punctuation kind of stops the flow. You might want to  use commas in some places.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Obsession is a dangerous thing, you know. You can waste years of your life being so obsessed about something, you forget to live your life.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.  I know it's not healthy, but that doesn't change how I feel.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013
Yeah, I know how it's like to be obsessed about something. Took me a long time to come back to my senses. If you're going through the same, good luck.
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Student Writer
This can mean anything!!!!! I won't say what this reminded me of--in the fear that thousands of those people come up to tarnish your work with crazy, illogical comments not related to this. I like this, because that's what I'm feeling at the moment!
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HermioneFrost Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very strong emotion! I know this feeling :blush:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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:iconmagicaljoey:
MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013   Writer
Very emotive.
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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Darvia123 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so great! Very strong emotions surging off of these words.
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student Artist
love it
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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TristenCoy Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Student General Artist
So relatable. 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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TristenCoy Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome (:
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Jtjonny01 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know this feeling.
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dracoequine Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm.. almost like you read my mind.. *blink*
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
I love it
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Welcome :)
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