You are my obsession.
Source of my depression.
One that I crave.
Love that is depraved.
I still hold on to.
I would die for you.
Even if you're not here.
My mind just won't clear.
Only one I want.
Mentally I attack.
I'd still take you back.
Glad you disappeared.
Return I feared.
Walk through my door.
Want you even more.
Wonder if I'll heal.
Was this even real?
Lovely work, thank you for letting me use your work; I'm publishing it in today's issue.
I have nothing left.
Your poems are amazing
It helps to see we aren't suffering alone
Wow, this absolutely amazing. I can relate 100%.
Thank you for writing this, it really helped clear my mind. ^^
Though it's about depression, it's full of speed.
VERY well written!
I love the flow of this, makes me want to re read it.
I like the rythm and separation of the verses, but I think the punctuation kind of stops the flow. You might want to use commas in some places.
Obsession is a dangerous thing, you know. You can waste years of your life being so obsessed about something, you forget to live your life.
Yeah. I know it's not healthy, but that doesn't change how I feel.
This can mean anything!!!!! I won't say what this reminded me of--in the fear that thousands of those people come up to tarnish your work with crazy, illogical comments not related to this. I like this, because that's what I'm feeling at the moment!
Very strong emotion! I know this feeling
This is so great! Very strong emotions surging off of these words.
I know this feeling.
Hmm.. almost like you read my mind.. *blink*
I love it