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What would it feel like,
To just disappear.
You wouldn't know,
If you just weren't here.
There is no feeling,
Because you can't feel.
You can't interpret.
You just aren't real.
It's so lonely here,
Where you used to be.
I look around,
But it's only me.
I was thinking about two things when I wrote this: suicide (not contemplating, just thinking) and the voice just disappeared since my dosage was changed.
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GIRmaniac12 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
Very beautiful! I can really relate to this
It's very well done! 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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ImEandMyself Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
so scary yet so true...
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CharChar1994 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013
i love this!! I always have that thought if you disappeared you wouldnt know what you were missing anyway,
well written!!
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Artist
vary deep
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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TheAngelDiscordia Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
After a couple times of reading it you really get to see through the cracks in the simplicity and notice how deep it gets.
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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R-Bans Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know the feeling, pretty good job.
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
Loneliness is hard, isn't it?
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If-Cloud-Was-A-Girl Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really like the simplicity of this, well done :)
And I also love your avatar, she looks how I feel ;)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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If-Cloud-Was-A-Girl Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No probs, just honest ;)
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Eyrean Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
A very respectable choice of theme, and a very respectable poem.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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Eyrean Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
:)
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:iconzford:
zford Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
Wow, it may look simple at first, but it's actually quite deep when you read it...Nice poem!
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconzford:
zford Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
:)
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Awesome
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:iconthemetheydontsee:
TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Your very welcome :D
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