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What would it feel like,
To just disappear.
You wouldn't know,
If you just weren't here.
There is no feeling,
Because you can't feel.
You can't interpret.
You just aren't real.
It's so lonely here,
Where you used to be.
I look around,
But it's only me.
I was thinking about two things when I wrote this: suicide (not contemplating, just thinking) and the voice just disappeared since my dosage was changed.
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:icongirmaniac12:
Very beautiful! I can really relate to this
It's very well done! 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconimeandmyself:
so scary yet so true...
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:iconcharchar1994:
i love this!! I always have that thought if you disappeared you wouldnt know what you were missing anyway,
well written!!
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TheMeTheyDontSee Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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angeluchiha7 Aug 14, 2013  Student Artist
vary deep
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TheMeTheyDontSee Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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angeluchiha7 Aug 14, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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TheAngelDiscordia Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
After a couple times of reading it you really get to see through the cracks in the simplicity and notice how deep it gets.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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