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Showing yourself doesn't make you weak.
I'll give you exactly what you seek.
This vulnerability is a part of you.
There isn't anything you can do.
I'm only here to give you help.
Don't have to do it by yourself.
It doesn't matter what you say.
I promise that I'm here to stay.
When you find it's hard to breathe,
Let me be there to relieve.
Want you to know I don't think less.
Only you think that you're a mess.
Please, I just want to be here.
I really do love you, dear.
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Thanea Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
touching Heart love it
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violetstory Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Love this :meow:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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violetstory Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Its my pleasure :meow:
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ConstantMirror Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
Having just dated a Borderline, this really hits home.
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Professional Writer
This is more like traditional verse, you have rhymed couplets.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I had my poems at tradition verse and someone told me that I need to change them because they don't follow any specific traditional poetry.
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Professional Writer
But trust my opinion. You should re-classify it but you may leave as is.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013   Writer
This is a very comforting piece of literature that brings across the emotions very well.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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