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Showing yourself doesn't make you weak.
I'll give you exactly what you seek.
This vulnerability is a part of you.
There isn't anything you can do.
I'm only here to give you help.
Don't have to do it by yourself.
It doesn't matter what you say.
I promise that I'm here to stay.
When you find it's hard to breathe,
Let me be there to relieve.
Want you to know I don't think less.
Only you think that you're a mess.
Please, I just want to be here.
I really do love you, dear.
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Thanea Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
touching Heart love it
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violetstory Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Love this :meow:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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violetstory Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Its my pleasure :meow:
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ConstantMirror Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
Having just dated a Borderline, this really hits home.
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Professional Writer
This is more like traditional verse, you have rhymed couplets.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I had my poems at tradition verse and someone told me that I need to change them because they don't follow any specific traditional poetry.
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Professional Writer
But trust my opinion. You should re-classify it but you may leave as is.
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MagicalJoey Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013   Writer
This is a very comforting piece of literature that brings across the emotions very well.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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SageFillyLuna Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student General Artist
I love this <3
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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ccfirebloom Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Awwww, sounds like love :heart:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It is.  I'm a very lucky girl.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
You sound...happy :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I am!  :D  He makes me really happy.
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
That's so good to hear. I hope it lasts for the rest of your life :)
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :D
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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
No problem.
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FaxNiggyFan1134 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
For some reason, your poems always seem to go with my life; first it was sad and lonely, wanting for happiness. Then it is unsureness of yourself, not knowing what will happen if you show yourself. After, more insecurity from personal problems. And to finish..... Finally finding your real friends, and this poem here shows what they feel for you. That they love you for you as true friends.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How strange.  I'm glad things are going better for you.
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FaxNiggyFan1134 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It is..... And thanks. I'm glad to have friends like them. Oddly enough, we've been friends for about 2 months now, and they know me better than someone who has known me for 3 years! Honestly, I sometimes catch myself thinking this is a dream.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know exactly how you feel.
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FaxNiggyFan1134 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for understanding....
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TutorVeritatis Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Good piece, some people I know I wish they would open up more and talk
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, and people often think that they're being a burden when they're not.
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TutorVeritatis Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Exactly, such is the case with one dear friend of mine, always worried she's distracting me when I choose to talk to her.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mine's my boyfriend.  Sweetest guy I've ever met and has so many amazing qualities, but he has the lowest self-esteem of anyone I've ever met.  This poem is specifically referring to when he has a panic attack, which he has fairly often, but he hates how anxious he is.  It doesn't bother me at all and I really want him to understand that.
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TutorVeritatis Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
With you I think he could overcome some things and if you ever want to discuss relationship ideas I'm free to ask. I think a lot about relationships since I do not have anyone intimate wise.
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