Showing yourself doesn't make you weak.
I'll give you exactly what you seek.
This vulnerability is a part of you.
There isn't anything you can do.
I'm only here to give you help.
Don't have to do it by yourself.
It doesn't matter what you say.
I promise that I'm here to stay.
When you find it's hard to breathe,
Let me be there to relieve.
Want you to know I don't think less.
Only you think that you're a mess.
Please, I just want to be here.
I really do love you, dear.
touching love it
Having just dated a Borderline, this really hits home.
This is more like traditional verse, you have rhymed couplets.
I had my poems at tradition verse and someone told me that I need to change them because they don't follow any specific traditional poetry.
This is a very comforting piece of literature that brings across the emotions very well.
I love this <3
Awwww, sounds like love
I am! He makes me really happy.
For some reason, your poems always seem to go with my life; first it was sad and lonely, wanting for happiness. Then it is unsureness of yourself, not knowing what will happen if you show yourself. After, more insecurity from personal problems. And to finish..... Finally finding your real friends, and this poem here shows what they feel for you. That they love you for you as true friends.
How strange. I'm glad things are going better for you.
It is..... And thanks. I'm glad to have friends like them. Oddly enough, we've been friends for about 2 months now, and they know me better than someone who has known me for 3 years! Honestly, I sometimes catch myself thinking this is a dream.
Good piece, some people I know I wish they would open up more and talk
Thank you, and people often think that they're being a burden when they're not.
Exactly, such is the case with one dear friend of mine, always worried she's distracting me when I choose to talk to her.
Mine's my boyfriend. Sweetest guy I've ever met and has so many amazing qualities, but he has the lowest self-esteem of anyone I've ever met. This poem is specifically referring to when he has a panic attack, which he has fairly often, but he hates how anxious he is. It doesn't bother me at all and I really want him to understand that.