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Wake up in a forest.
Take a look around.
Nothing in sight.
Not a path to be found.
I am alone.
Unsure what to do.
Nothing's familiar
Everything is new
I'm so afraid.
I begin to cry.
I'm so lost.
Don't know why.
I need your strength.
Please help me.
Guide me though.
Give me eyes to see.
I'm still scared.
I wish I could hide.
At least I know.
You'll be at my side.
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Artist
vary dark and sad but good
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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angeluchiha7 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Artist
your welcome
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:clap:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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NearlyInvisibleMind Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're so very welcome:aww:
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featherling Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Writer
It's beautiful. If you need it, I'll be at your side :huggle:
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug:
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Kreistina26 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I loved it. With rhythm and the aspect of being scared of the unknown. 
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
I think it's a nice view on the fear of the unknown.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Professional Writer
I really like the simpleness and direct words, and the rhythm.
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TheMeTheyDontSee Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you
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AnnaGladue Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Professional Writer
:)
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