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I will hold you close
Don't worry about your fears
Because I am here
Don't worry about your fears
Because I am here
Literature
Conflicting Love
Sometimes (I) can’t stand this…
This distance between us…
(W)ill it ever close?
Will (i) be ab(l)e to handle it?
I don’t want it to tear us apart.
You were a(l)ways there for me
Even when I f(a)iled you,
Disappointed you.
P(l)ease hear me no(w).
Don’t turn (a)way from me.
(Y)ou are the one I need.
The one I want to (s)ee
In my darkest days.
Even so….
(L)ove is all you need?
I’m n(o)t so sure that is true…
It seems like you a(v)oid me…
Not looking me in the eye.
You know my f(e)elings
Are for (y)ou and you alone.
No one else c(o)mpares.
Yo(u)r light guides me…
And even if
Literature
Will You?
You blind me with,
Your beautiful light,
You are my angel,
In disguise.
Now we stand,
Side by side,
Hand in hand,
It's oh so right.
The world fades,
Into your eyes,
Where I do gaze,
Day and night.
Kiss me please,
One last time,
The cold hard breeze,
Marks the end of our time.
Until the day,
When sun rise again,
I come your way,
My heart soars again.
High above,
On wings of love,
You're all I need,
You're all I want.
So I ask you one small thing,
As I get down on one knee,
I cant register anything,
I just say.......
"Will you marry me?"
Literature
I Gave My Heart Away
I gave my heart away
to the boy
with rosy cheeks,
but he kindly
gave it back, saying
'It's not meant to be'.
I gave my heart away
to the boy
with big brown eyes,
and he gently
held it in his hands
and loved me by surprise.
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It's a very sweet sentiment/feeling in the poem. But all three lines, I'm sorry to say, are mostly cliche. Which is a bit too much for such a short poem. Lines like: "hold you close" and "don't worry about your fears" have been used so many times in poetry, that they tend to lose their impact. If you rewrote the lines to something a bit more original/personal and put in a vivid image, then I think the poem would have a stronger impact on the reader. I don't mean so sound mean or anything - only trying to help. Thanks for the read 